Photo Challenge:
Footfall on a forest floor and then stillness. breath swirls in the cold air. movement ahead.stillness shifts to an inner place.pure being. at one with the prey.arrow unleashed finds soft flesh. gratitude offered, a prayer for the fallen. totem left to appease the gods
in spirit we move
dancing our way through the light
to reveal one-ness
Like a song. Beautiful words and cadence.
Thank You as always Brenda
Paul, your recent posts inspired a story I was writing, and African drumming elbowed their way into the story and became central. I am pleased with it, but my African drumming class was over 20 years ago. I wondered if you would be willing to read it for me, it’s only 866 words. I plan to submit it as a previously unpublished picture book manuscript, so I can’t put it up on my website. My email is on my about page, if you are willing, can you pop me an email and I’ll reply with the text? I did research and beat a lot of rhythms on my djembe, but I so hate to get details wrong, so I just wondered if you have time to look it over… Feel free to say, no, we are all busy and, as I said, I am happy with it.
Send it Brenda. I’d be happy to have a look at it. Can’t locate email on your about page ( it’s early morn and I am not so alert) If you visit http://www.rhythmbridge.com you can email it to me from the contacts page there.
Ok, will do soon, before or after my writing class. Thanks!!
Did you send?
great rhythm here, and words which blend well together.