Frank is hosting MTB at dVerse and tonight the form is the acrostic.
Time is a spiral shaped spin-drifT
Infinity twists and shouts BanzaI
Mercurial wisps wander the rooM
Eternity meets it’s maker in timE
time squared
Frank is hosting MTB at dVerse and tonight the form is the acrostic.
Time is a spiral shaped spin-drifT
Infinity twists and shouts BanzaI
Mercurial wisps wander the rooM
Eternity meets it’s maker in timE
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both of us are on an eternity kick today. I love this short poem so full of….time!
Time is a great word to think about… I believe eternity is everywhere…
The last line gives me much to think about. Nice acrostic on time.
fascinating- time, a moment can last and be savoured forever and yet there is never enough time.perhaps we expect too much.
I love it brother, when you get all metaphysical & stuff. You picked off a scab for me, one who believes time is an artificial construct, that infinity & eternity are within each entity, guiding every husk.
“Eternity meets its maker in time” — what a great line! Love the time acrostic!
The dual-meaning final line is a killer! Nice.
Fractallian.
Nice acrostic Paul, it’s about time we thought about eternity, lol
‘material wisps wander the room’ love that line, Paul. The ending gives this quite a jolt.
Love it,,the Bonsai line still has me thinking 🙂
Time is never ending, it is always now.
love the thought of eternity shouting Banzai!
“Infinity twists”, that’s such a great thought. Too much in too few words. Wonderful!
I love that you’ve captured the square shape in your short but deep poem, Paul, and the line ‘Infinity twists and shouts Banzai’ made me smile.
Love your take on time…..and the double acrostic on either edge…time, a double-edged sword for some. Well done!
oops…..and forgot to mention the title….a clever one for this double acrostic!
Clever beyond eternity. Banzai!
A perfect subject for an acrostic poem and I love the title too! 😉
I like the serio-comic message inside the form.
kaykuala
This is great Paul. You’ve done it both ways
Hank
Clever title. Love the double acrostic and how time is at the beginning and ending of everything.