i want to kiss
goosebumps
into being
licking
your cold
tingling
curves
i want to melt
your soft
sweet form
send ripples
into
your
raspberry
i want to tongue
you down
to your
naked
wafer
nibble
slowly
i want to devour you
savor every
single
sweet
moment’s
sensual
mouthful
i want to shiver
with pleasure
as your ice
cold
being
bites
me
submission for Toads Tuesday Platform
Thanks to Colleen for the song suggestion ( See comments. I went with a different artist cos I love Walk off the Earth)
*Audio of the poem added below.
Paul Scribbles 
Should I say “hot” or “cold?” This reminds me of Sarah Mclachlan’s song “Your love is better than ice cream.
Not familiar with the song but it might just be a nice addition to the post. Off for a listen now. Thanks.
Found a different version I really love. Great tip.
Good golly, Pauly. This is my new favorite.
Major yum.
I’m gonna read this sooooo many times.
Had a feeling this might float your boat 😉
Now THAT is what I call a good ice cream cone. Tofino has the best ones…..truly a sensory experience. Smiles.
Thanks Sherry. A bit of a departure for me but I think it worked.
Hot stuff for a cold treat.
Thanks.
My goodness this is good!❤️ *swooooon*
Thank You Sanaa.
Yes.. we seem to write in a similar streak… maybe it’s time for an erotica prompt… always loved the ice and hot coming together
Thanks Bjorn. First foray for me into this world. I agree it would make for an interesting prompt.
You two smushed together, i.e. cherries and ice cream, made for a delicious dessert breakfast. 😛
Smushed…love it.
Hot ice cream!
Who knew?
Uh huh…………………….?
I’m not sure what to make of that comment Kerry 😉
She means she wants more. 🙂
lol
Hee hee.
Wow Paul! I think we all need an ice cream to cool down!
😉
i want, i want, i want, a sugar cone
Sounds like the beginning of a Spice Girls number 😉
Well, those are your stanza lines… I only closed
I auditioned but there was no space for old spice 😉
Ice cream…!!!
Ha!
Goodness …all of a a sudden I feel a need for a cup of tea and a lie down:)
😉
These leaves the senses shivering with heat. The imagery contained in the first stanza is a picture of delight. Wonderful!
Thank You. I’m glad you enjoyed. If it worked for you then I got it right 😉
Luv the poem and thanks for the video too. Happy you dropped by my blog
much love…
Thanks Gillena
“i want to tongue
you down
to your
naked
wafer”
This gets me most of all, because you’re talking about finding her bare soul — not to destroy it, but to let it then eat you.
I like this. I think I was on a much more physical plane when I wrote it though.That said, this kind of sensual can get deeply spiritual, so maybe that vibe is here.
It’s probably just how I’m reading today. It’s a really good poem. They all are. You’re a gifted poet.
I like your instinct. There is a part of this that goes deeper. Just added a reading of it.
Not sure I can handle that. 😉
JK. I’ll be back when I can listen.