whisky-in-the-jar creaks dreams open wide
breathing whisper-spiced breezy peppered-bliss
bubble-kicking shimmer-dance twists, flickers and grins
springing cue-scarred dawn-rosy spilling ghost giggles
skipping still leaves spark-drizzled fear storms
free hope melts shadow-clouds curling balloon sounds
echoing scarred-green journey’s to lull all the words home again
Submission for dVerse Quadrille #44
Paul Scribbles 
Wonderful!
Ah, creative use of hyphens. Lovely.
Playfully fun
…all the words home again…
LOVE IT!
Nicely played with all the words. Enjoy the distilleries,
I did tastings on a journey last weekend. Add a little water
and so many different tastes rise.
Loooooove it. Last line is fantastic. And this is just delicious:
“breathing whisper-spiced breezy peppered-bliss”
Nice one, Paul! I love the reference to one of my favourite folk songs (also by the wonderful Thin Lizzy). Great use of hyphens!
Some wonderful word-play in this poem, Paul.
You make me feel very very thirsty Paul… so many good tastes to explore.
What fun, Paul! This is wonderful.
I like this- I feel like whisper-spiced and peppered-bliss could be synonyms in some alternate universe.
Homebound..I specially like: whisper-spiced breezy peppered-bliss~
The whiskey in the jar .. creaking dreams open wide (or wide open)… yup! I can relate to that! Wonderfully done! (Where’ve you been, by the way?)
Running a rhythmical training for 65 folk and then being trained along with 16 others to begin work as a new global team..then two days in Islay drinking whisky. Need to lie down now.
Wow! Good for you 🙂