eggzipit 1 (groan!)


crunching a verb

or two between these

rock hard teeth creates a

jumble of letters to bounce

off the page and fires up

an idea that whilst a

 leap could result

in the zipping of

this word melt

in a long

egg of



I began the series again after Quadrille #44 so I now have leap,melt,rock, crunch, bounce, hard, fire, egg and zip to include in the challenge for ‘all the words’

12 thoughts on “eggzipit 1 (groan!)

  1. kim881 says:

    Oh, great shape and ‘crunching a verb’ is just brilliant! I also love the jumble of letters bouncing off the page. A fun Quadrille with all the words, Paul.

  2. Shawna says:

    I love this. Delicious, on a couple of levels.

    (I could tear up some eggplant, by the way; it’s mega-yummy. So are verbs and such.)

    I like that your poem looks like a zipper “head” … or a keyhole.

    At the end, I also see/hear “a long hug of swords.” And your title, oh my word. You are so smart! Exhibit 1. I won’t tell you what that makes me think of, but it’s an art showing I could get down on.

  3. lillian says:

    Bravo! And thanks for the list – I’ve been ready to jump in but when I last did, I didn’t have the right words. Will start giving it a try again😊

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