it’s not you it’s me

foundation’s gone unless we make-up time for that brave face to crumble

 

Day 14 of NaPoWriMo and this morning feels like a wall.

Marion woos us with some chilled toons from Carla Morrison. I’m not sure the muse picked up the vibe this morning as an American sentence flowed out which can be read two ways without punctuation. To punctuate or not?…that is the question.

As always I’m hanging ( by a thread this morning) with the Toads all month.

18 thoughts on “it’s not you it’s me

  1. Kerry says:

    We hit the wall, sooner or later.. but I know you will push through.
    Here is a great line interwoven with metaphor and pun – and great title too.. it will see us through until tomorrow.

  2. kanzensakura says:

    Wonderful sentence. We all hit the wall and hang by a thread. It seems a lot of days I do that. Depression is a real bitch. As for punctuation, I know haiku has no punctuation except for the aspirated short dash. American sentences? I am clueless.

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