eyes that could melt rock
set wild fires
incandescent
to zip sparks
leap(ing) stars
aside moon-shadows
bouncing hard at galaxy’s edge
crunch(ing)
planetary egg into dust
we gather our lost selves
to sweep clean
that detritus of soul
in cornea’s heart centre
all’s reflected
Nice lines: “crunch(ing)
planetary egg into dust”
Bravo!!! And you’re welcome for my providing a verb😊
Cool. There’s a superpower Titan kind of feel here.
What a forceful power… great use of all those words.
Powerful eyes and heart into the core of us Paul ~ Love your share ~