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better without

when your poetry melts a glacial dissolution

in a dance of life’s endings

it is time

to scribe with the grim ink

of the dead and the dying

that more than human extinction

it is time

to wring tears from rock

blood from trees

sense from coyote

it is time

to watch in alarm

as four riderless horses

perish in the floods

it is time

for fire to burn it all

as the curtain falls and

hope’s siren fades

her lament resigned to living

out there alone

in that future abyss

who looks for hope

in the present moment

where it need not exist

those who cannot dwell there

distracted by the growth

that breeds ignorance

there’s plenty of oil

there’s plenty of coal

there’s plenty of time

all down that gold paved

hope-filled road called the future

that we never ever reach

well where did all that hoping get us

take a look around

this is the future

one your ancestor’s could not have dreamed up

would not in their wildest have hoped for

those hopes that they surely visioned

now lie at the roadside in tatters

maybe hope was always a siren

Written for Earthweal’s Weekly Challenge

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11 thoughts on “better without

  1. I have to agree on your vision of hope here, Paul. So often a bitter mistress, and the particular hope, that all will magically go well despite oblivious greed ruling everything, has the most bitter taste of all. Above and beyond that, I love the flow of this, the measured cadence and music, like an elegy…”it is time/to wring tears from rock..” indeed.

    1. Thanks for dropping by. Always a pleasure to read you. Even your comments are poetic. To be honest, my take on hope has been deeply informed by another, one Stephen Jenkinson, who prefers, based on a lived life, to leave hopeful and hopeless aside and instead live, in his words, hope free.

  2. Grim ink indeed, Paul, “to wring tears from rock/ blood from trees/ sense from coyote/
    it is time/ to watch in alarm/ as four riderless horses/ perish in the floods.” I often think how appalled my grandmother would be at the state of the world. Who ever could have dreamed this nightmare? Oh, I love your friend’s idea of living hope free. It is the most realistic of the options. Such fine writing, Paul. So glad you found earthweal.

  3. I can see your point of view. Blind hope will get us nowhere, but I hope that people will start waking up to the truth and work together to act before it is too late.

    1. Action is what we require to plant seeds for a future we will never see. Personally I think too late already sailed and those that will follow us are in for a hell of a ride. Nonetheless I will work today for a better future for my descendants. In the present moment I do not need hope. I need to get to work.

  4. Despair writes more poems, and hope that this world will change is a dim prospect for aubades. But whattayagonnado? as the Soprano boys would say. The heart needs light.

  5. The heart needs light for sure and it must also be tempered by shadow. I am not suggesting we give up here. I am, if anything calling for us to write more fiercely from the present moment. With what is. No one hopes for ‘Now’ because we are already here and in the collective history of hoping, where did it get us? Perhaps we write our love songs for the future from a bed of grief and gratitude?

  6. Sorry for the late comment. I agree with you here – both hope and hopelessness lead to our fatal inaction.
    Love the grim ink and the driving rhythm of the repeated it is time- it is time – it is time.
    Enjoyed the Stephen Jenkinson interview too. (besides his wisdom and clarity he also has an uncanny likeness to my late father which is always a little unnerving – in a good way)

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