exhale all hope
push it out
birth the death
of you
fall back
backwards
in one last act
of trust
into the embrace
of the abyss
sink now
into sweet release
inevitable darkness
falls
like
rain
an eternal shadow
not just blocking
but eliminating
the light
here in this
shroud
faith
finally tested
and at this moment
no one
no one
will come
save your
own
disintegrating
self
to invite you
to
dance
with demise
singing this song
come
let’s make
caterpillar soup
Notes: Poem inspired by an article in Scientific American
Here’s a snippet. For the full article follow the link above.
“But what does that radical transformation entail? How does a caterpillar rearrange itself into a butterfly? What happens inside a chrysalis or cocoon?
First, the caterpillar digests itself, releasing enzymes to dissolve all of its tissues. If you were to cut open a cocoon or chrysalis at just the right time, caterpillar soup would ooze out. But the contents of the pupa are not entirely an amorphous mess. Certain highly organized groups of cells known as imaginal discs survive the digestive process. Before hatching, when a caterpillar is still developing inside its egg, it grows an imaginal disc for each of the adult body parts it will need as a mature butterfly or moth—discs for its eyes, for its wings, its legs and so on.”
I was drinking your caterpillar soup this weekend. It was too worrisome a time to sing very much. A nice write, I enjoyed it.
My contribution is two posts this morning. A 2006 writing and a shorter 2009 version that I officially called a poem.
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Nicely done. I read that article too. Incredible transformation. Dance with demise… Perfect!
birth the death
of you… that is worth pondering over.. what butterflies do we need to enable?
Was thinking of it, as a personal transformation, especially, after the first stanza, Paul, as the butterfly is, one the symbols that the trans-community has adopted, as it’s own.
Oh Paul lets not, give the butterfly a chance to be morphed and lets have spinach soup instead
Have a nice Tuesday
much love…
Never saw soup coming.
Beautiful.
This is a thoughtful look at leaning back into that void, trusting the mystery. I love pondering the idea of caterpillar soup, and the transformation taking place as the butterfly takes wing. Really beautiful.
This is quite the astounding write–magical.
How death and demise transforms into a beautiful recreation…caterpillar soup is truly an amazing recipe.
in this shroud… yes, a caterpillar has to sink into itself … I like this !
I love this.. especially the surprise ending 🙂 Brilliant write ❤️
Worth a try.
Terrific! Really good. And I made soup tonight 🙂
I think your poems seem to be written to be read aloud.
I really love where you got your inspiration to this.
I like the opening lines, Paul:
‘exhale all hope
push it out
birth the death
of you’ –
in my mind’s eye I can see a struggling cocoon. That’s me at the moment – struggling
‘here in this
shroud
faith
finally tested’
if I ever had any faith. The world is such a scary place.
The upside of my poem Kim is that a butterfly will always emerge from the soup…the butterfly’s dna is contained within it. There is always hope.
I hope so 😊
Paul, would you please email me at wildwomantwo@gmail.com? Want to check in with you about the in tandem poem and dont have your email. Thanks, kiddo.
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