Susie offers the prompt at Toads today
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For today’s challenge I want you to write a poem from your immediate surroundings. For example where I am sitting there is a vase of flowers, silver thermos, a mailbox nameplate from my father’s mailbox, a window, a rather sickly violet, books, a clock, a tape dispenser, the whir of an air conditioner. I could go on and on. Your poem could be a combination of what you see, hear, taste, feel, just pull from the spot where you are writing.
stuffed bird sings at a squeeze
zen masters await my eye
journals of music
and poetry lie used
and fingered
and loved
flowers drying in old water
display paper-like beauty
and faces of family
and colors and hope
and wisdom
burst out
from the wall in front
of this keyboard
drums and guitars
capos and flutes
and bells
and buddha’s
and prayer flags
and stuff from my daughters flat
blocking the bookshelf
smile
peace
is every step
this
is
it
This IS it. All we got.
Wonderful journey of the mind
Thank you for letting us see your surroundings. Love, well read books, photos..What a lovely place of inspiration. Thanks so much for writing for the prompt!
I couldn’t decide, the flower still old water drying or the (old) squeezy bird toy or the daughters stuff junking up the room, which was worse. All was very realistic per messes I’ve dealt with
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its good to be happy with your surroundings; peace and luv
much love…
The clutter of a mind in a house sifts out and away to a singular Zen breath, the Yes just beyond “this / is / it” Amen.
Oh yes!!❤️ This is definitely it 😀
this is it…years measured in objects…very nice paul…
Well, we all have stuff. It all means something. Yours sounds like it means family and memories and peace. I guess it’s more than just stuff, isn’t it?
Interesting that the stuff line caught your attention….that was a specific reference to the pile blocking the bookshelf…the other items whilst not being included in the ‘stuff’ pile are still of course ‘stuff’…everything is stuff and has a story….unless it’s non-stuff 😉
Ooh, I can see this so clearly, Paul! And I I know those ‘flowers drying in old water’!
I don’t pick flowers daily…..and when I do have them i leave them in the vase way too long.
Me too! I hate to throw them away.
A room full of character! It is it’s own muse. Love this Paul!
and buddha’s and prayer flags
and stuff from my daughters flat
blocking the bookshelf
The feeling of peace and salvation will always be there even with just ordinary items of some religious significance!
Hank
Perhaps peace is not there…but here 😉
Maybe finding Zen wherever we are is better than falsely feng shu our world without it.
This is it, and it couldn’t be any better.