Happy Thursday to all you dVerse bards from Kim of Writing in North Norfolk, and welcome to the tavern! I am your serving wench for today, with ale, sack wine, malmsey and mead.
I have a wonderful little book by Erik Didriksen called Pop Sonnets, in which some well-known pop songs have been re-written in the style of William Shakespeare. As the sonnets in the book are copyrighted, I have provided a link to Tumblr, where new pop sonnets are posted every Thursday: https://popsonnet.tumblr.com/
The book itself is a work of art, printed in an old-fashioned font, Shakespearean style, with a front page stating ‘Never before imprinted’. It is divided into five sections:
- Sonnets of Love include Van Morrison’s ‘Brown Eyed Girl’, The Cure’s ‘Friday I’m in Love’ and Weezer’s ’Buddy Holly’;
- Sonnets of Despair include Britney Spears’ ‘Oops! I Did It Again’, Green Day’s ‘Basket Case’ and Gloria Gaynor’s ‘I Will Survive’;
- Sonnets of Time and Mortality include ‘Talking Heads’ ‘Once in a Lifetime’, Journey’s ‘Don’t Stop Beliievin’’ and Don Henley’s ‘The Boys of Summer’;
- Rogues, Rascals and Wanton Women include the Beastie Boys’ ‘(You Gotta) Fight for Your Right (to Party!)’, Bruce Springsteen’s ‘Dancing in the Dark’ and Katy Perry’s ‘I Kissed a Girl’;
- Ballads of Heroes include Arlo Guthrie’s ‘Alice’s Restaurant’, Black Sabbath’s ‘Iron Man’ and Frank Sinatra’s ‘My Way’.
There are so many songs, I can’t list them all.
The challenge is to choose a modern popular song, preferably one that everyone knows, and re-write it as a Shakespearean sonnet, which can be serious, humorous or just plain silly! To make it more fun, don’t give your sonnet its original title so that we can take a guess as to what it might be!
This form has already been covered in previous dVerse prompts and the one with the most comprehensive explanation is a Form for All by Gay Reiser Cannon from September 2012, for which I have provided a link: https://dversepoets.com/2012/09/13/formforall-basic-sonnet-forms/
If you are new, here’s how to join in:
- Write a sonnet in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join so check back to see more poems;
- Read and comment on other poets’ work, we all come here to have our poems read;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
from where cometh this flutter of feather
to oft time and mark thy approach nearby
to draw thou as would i us together
why falleth sparks from the heavenly sky
as oft time thou comest hither by here
twas on thy named day seraph forgathered
and fashioned a vision worthy of seer
sprinkled dust of moon locks thereby lathered
all silver’d o’er to spark eye of cobalt
maidens doth follow thee all about here
dismally not one is deemed worth thy salt
so alone must you go from year to year
and so Narcissus reflecting you go
beware o’ the whisper broken echo
Beautifully done, Paul, but I’m struggling to work out what it is. You and Frank have me bamboozled at the moment. But I’m determined to work it out!
By Jove, I’ve got it! ‘Close to You’ by The carpenters! You hid that well!
Well done. Little twist at the end may have thrown a few off the trail but the song is there 😉
I don’t know which song this is, but that’s probably a good thing. It leaves a little mystery.
Cat’s out of the bag now Frank 😉
I hope the jargon the dosts and the thees and thous wasn’t obligatory. I don’t think I’d have been able to keep it up. Well done you for seeing it right the way through!
I’m sure twas not but I seeketh method in mine own madness 😉
I think it’s easier to keep on taking the tablets…
thou dost wound me 😉
For me, I mean. You’re obviously far further down the road to living with several people in your head than I am 🙂
thy riposte is rapier like…..
i’ll stop now…it’s getting weird even for me!
You don’t want to end up like Johnny Weismuller or William Shatner, do you?
Tarzan or Captain Kirk? Tough call.
They’re both taken. You’ll have to pick somebody else. How about Branwell Brontë? There won’t be much competition.
I just guffawed in a cafe at Glasgow Central. Now there are others who think i am odd.
Just don’t slip into your Tarzan persona…not in Glasgow, for pity’s sake!
I’m all about the Branwell now
You need to find a dark pub then, and a corner to be sick in.
In Glasgow? Spoilt fae choice
Trainspotters Anonymous.
That’s Edinburgh unless I catch the wrong drift.
Edinburgh? I thought Edinburgh was posh! Well, fuck me sideways, you live and learn, don’t ya?
It has it’s rough side for sure.
Must do!
Found myself whistling before the last line 🙂 Well done!
Whistling random stuff or the tune? 😉
HAHA! The end of the song goes into a whistle of the tune. Not sure if the whistler was Karen, Richard, or a pair of paid puckers! Bachrach was big on whistling in his tunes.
I never heard the ‘whistling version’ before. Fascinating.
I think it’s the Bacharach version, and it just ends that way.
Aha
For a bit, I thought it was YOU’RE SO VAIN. Your mastery of olde English is remarkable & accurate. A number of folks out here used that approach. You more than rocked the prompt. producing a classic sonnet.
I did my research for this one Glenn…wanted to get the feel and rhythm right.Glad you enjoyed it.
ah…..I, of course, didn’t guess until I saw it named by Kim and then it all fit. “mark thy approach nearby” and especially “twas on thy named day seraph forgathered.” I really liked this Carpenter song and was so saddened to hear of her health problems and ultimate death.
Well done here and with excellent language as well.
Their music didn’t really fit into the rest of my playlist but it lifted me. Her voice. Oh my…and she was a great drummer.
I couldn’t get this one but I cheated by reading the comments, then everything became clear. Good job, Paul!
Thanks Bekkie.
Ahhhhhhhhh, close to you!
Had it in the first three lines… loved it all the way through.
Bravo.
Thank you!
No worries. Your’s is giving me a right old head scratching moment. It’s there but it’snot.
You have all the time in the world.
ooooohh….clue right?
Could be. You’re getting warmer.
Clocks 😉 Coldplay.
Give the man a hand!
I love that song and I really admire the old English sonnet response Paul ~
Thanks Grace
one of my all time favourite Carpenters songs and you did justice to each line.
Voice of an angel.Thanks.
Once I’ve read the comments and someone has ID’d the song, I then go back and reread, mumbling “of course, of course!” Well done!
Thanks Bev. That gave me a smile.
Paul, this is simply gorgeous. Goodness.
Thanks De.